'背下這些滿分作文進步看得見建議家長為孩子收藏'

英語 收藏 不完美媽媽 範文 翅膀英語 2019-08-29
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有一點必須說明,經常有朋友噴說背誦很低級,沒有什麼效果,沒有什麼科學性等等,那我想說一句,如果還感覺背誦沒有效果,原因只有一個,那就是背誦的少了。繼續背誦,效果就出來了,就看得見了。

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有一點必須說明,經常有朋友噴說背誦很低級,沒有什麼效果,沒有什麼科學性等等,那我想說一句,如果還感覺背誦沒有效果,原因只有一個,那就是背誦的少了。繼續背誦,效果就出來了,就看得見了。

背下這些滿分作文進步看得見建議家長為孩子收藏

無論你現在上幾年級,這20篇英語範文都應該好好看一看。它們涵蓋了初中三年涉及到的所有英語寫作的話題,包括學習、健康、網絡、生活、環保、禮儀等,會為英語寫作提供清晰的思路和豐富的素材,多看、多記、多思,孩子一定能夠像這些作者一樣,寫出優秀滿分英語作文的!

1

為了交流學習經驗,提高學習效率,《中學生英語輔導報》舉行了一次以How to be a good learner?為題的徵文比賽活動,請寫一篇80詞左右的短文談談你的看法。

【優秀滿分範文】

How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.

I think all these above will be helpful to us.

2

親愛的同學,你的初中學習生活馬上就要結束了,請你以“My English Study”為題,談一下三年以來學習英語的心得體會。

要求:1.要點包括你在英語學習中所遇到的困難、解決的方法以及學習感悟;2.詞數80左右。

【優秀滿分範文】

My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.

In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

3

父親節馬上就要到了,但是有些同學不知道送什麼禮物給父親。請根據下面的提示進行適當擴展,並向同學們提出一些建議。80詞左右,開頭和結尾以給出(不計入總詞數)。

提示:1.如果有足夠的零花錢,可以為父親買一些使用單不貴的東西,如領帶等:

2.還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如為父親準備一杯茶等他下班後飲用等。

【優秀滿分範文】

Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.

If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.

No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?

4

請根據提示以“The Spring Festival”為題,寫一篇不少於80詞的英語短文。

提示:1.春節是中國最重要的節日;

2.人們大多回家過年,家庭成員團聚;

3.家人一起吃團年飯、看電視、拜訪親朋好友(friends and relatives);

4.孩子們喜歡春節。

【優秀滿分範文】

The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.

People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.

Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.

5

假設Linda是你的好朋友,你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學回來,你們很高興見到彼此。請根據提示,簡要介紹Linda的變化。

提示:1.外貌:以前個子矮,短髮;現在個子高多了,長髮。

2.愛好:以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天;現在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步。

3.性格:以前外向;現在有些內向。

要求:1.不要逐字翻譯,適當發揮;

2.層次清晰,語言流暢;

3.80詞左右。

【優秀滿分範文】

Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.

She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.

I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.

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背景設定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael給他發來電子郵件,想了解康明家鄉的變化。假如你是康敏,請根據以下提示,給Miachael回一封電子郵件。

過去

生活條件差,道路狹窄,車輛少,住不好,吃不飽,聯繫不便......

現在

生活條件優越,道路寬,車輛多,住得舒適,手機普及......

要求:1.圍繞以上內容進行合理表述;

2.所表述的內容必須包含表中的所有方面;

3.詞數80詞左右,開頭語以給出(不計入詞數)。

參考詞彙:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通訊),telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy

【優秀滿分範文】

Dear Michael,

You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.

Sincerely

Kang Min

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隨著網絡的發展,人們消費觀念轉變,購物方式也在悄然地發生變化。“網購”成為一種時尚,越來越多的學生也正加入到網購群體中。請你根據以下表格的提示,寫一篇網上購物的文章。

優點

1. 足不出戶;節約時間;避免擁擠、勞累。

2. 價格通常比較便宜。

3. 可供選擇的範圍廣,品種多。

缺點

1. 只能看到圖片,看不到商品本身。

2. 容易購買大量不太需要的東西,造成浪費。

注意:1.所表述的內容必須包含表格中的所有方面;

2.80詞左右,開頭文章已給出,不計入總詞數。

參考詞彙:網購 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 導致 cause

【優秀滿分範文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

8

假如你是李華,今年上初三了,現在的生活和以前大不一樣了。請你根據自身的情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己的變化。詞數:60-80。

【優秀滿分範文】

I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.

I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.

I really miss my old days.

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有一點必須說明,經常有朋友噴說背誦很低級,沒有什麼效果,沒有什麼科學性等等,那我想說一句,如果還感覺背誦沒有效果,原因只有一個,那就是背誦的少了。繼續背誦,效果就出來了,就看得見了。

背下這些滿分作文進步看得見建議家長為孩子收藏

無論你現在上幾年級,這20篇英語範文都應該好好看一看。它們涵蓋了初中三年涉及到的所有英語寫作的話題,包括學習、健康、網絡、生活、環保、禮儀等,會為英語寫作提供清晰的思路和豐富的素材,多看、多記、多思,孩子一定能夠像這些作者一樣,寫出優秀滿分英語作文的!

1

為了交流學習經驗,提高學習效率,《中學生英語輔導報》舉行了一次以How to be a good learner?為題的徵文比賽活動,請寫一篇80詞左右的短文談談你的看法。

【優秀滿分範文】

How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.

I think all these above will be helpful to us.

2

親愛的同學,你的初中學習生活馬上就要結束了,請你以“My English Study”為題,談一下三年以來學習英語的心得體會。

要求:1.要點包括你在英語學習中所遇到的困難、解決的方法以及學習感悟;2.詞數80左右。

【優秀滿分範文】

My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.

In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

3

父親節馬上就要到了,但是有些同學不知道送什麼禮物給父親。請根據下面的提示進行適當擴展,並向同學們提出一些建議。80詞左右,開頭和結尾以給出(不計入總詞數)。

提示:1.如果有足夠的零花錢,可以為父親買一些使用單不貴的東西,如領帶等:

2.還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如為父親準備一杯茶等他下班後飲用等。

【優秀滿分範文】

Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.

If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.

No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?

4

請根據提示以“The Spring Festival”為題,寫一篇不少於80詞的英語短文。

提示:1.春節是中國最重要的節日;

2.人們大多回家過年,家庭成員團聚;

3.家人一起吃團年飯、看電視、拜訪親朋好友(friends and relatives);

4.孩子們喜歡春節。

【優秀滿分範文】

The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.

People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.

Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.

5

假設Linda是你的好朋友,你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學回來,你們很高興見到彼此。請根據提示,簡要介紹Linda的變化。

提示:1.外貌:以前個子矮,短髮;現在個子高多了,長髮。

2.愛好:以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天;現在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步。

3.性格:以前外向;現在有些內向。

要求:1.不要逐字翻譯,適當發揮;

2.層次清晰,語言流暢;

3.80詞左右。

【優秀滿分範文】

Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.

She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.

I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.

6

背景設定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael給他發來電子郵件,想了解康明家鄉的變化。假如你是康敏,請根據以下提示,給Miachael回一封電子郵件。

過去

生活條件差,道路狹窄,車輛少,住不好,吃不飽,聯繫不便......

現在

生活條件優越,道路寬,車輛多,住得舒適,手機普及......

要求:1.圍繞以上內容進行合理表述;

2.所表述的內容必須包含表中的所有方面;

3.詞數80詞左右,開頭語以給出(不計入詞數)。

參考詞彙:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通訊),telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy

【優秀滿分範文】

Dear Michael,

You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.

Sincerely

Kang Min

7

隨著網絡的發展,人們消費觀念轉變,購物方式也在悄然地發生變化。“網購”成為一種時尚,越來越多的學生也正加入到網購群體中。請你根據以下表格的提示,寫一篇網上購物的文章。

優點

1. 足不出戶;節約時間;避免擁擠、勞累。

2. 價格通常比較便宜。

3. 可供選擇的範圍廣,品種多。

缺點

1. 只能看到圖片,看不到商品本身。

2. 容易購買大量不太需要的東西,造成浪費。

注意:1.所表述的內容必須包含表格中的所有方面;

2.80詞左右,開頭文章已給出,不計入總詞數。

參考詞彙:網購 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 導致 cause

【優秀滿分範文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

8

假如你是李華,今年上初三了,現在的生活和以前大不一樣了。請你根據自身的情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己的變化。詞數:60-80。

【優秀滿分範文】

I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.

I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.

I really miss my old days.

背下這些滿分作文進步看得見建議家長為孩子收藏

10

某英文報社正就青少年與父母關係這一話題開展題為How to keep a good relationship with parents的徵文活動。請你根據以下要點,寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。

要點:1.父母規矩太多,過於強調學習成績,不理解自己等問題;

2.你對這些問題的看法;

3.你與父母保持良好關係的做法。

【優秀滿分範文】

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.

10

今天是母親節。假定你是李華,請給你的美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件,談談你將如何與母親一起度過這個特別的日子。要點如下:

1. 表述你與母親間的情感;

2. 為母親製作一張卡片;

3. 幫助母親做點事;

4. 陪母親散步等。

注意:1.詞數80左右;

2.請不要逐句翻譯,可適當發揮;

3.郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。

【優秀滿分範文】

Dear John,

It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?

I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.

Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.

What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

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英語課代表分發試卷的時候發現了一份沒有署名的試卷,成績為滿分。請你幫助課代表分析它會時誰的。

要求:1.設想當時的情景,適當擴展細節;

2.書寫工整,100詞左右。

參考詞彙:top student優等生;handwriting筆跡;full marks滿分

【優秀滿分範文】

we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.

Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.

12

現在很多中學生都喜歡流行歌曲。請你根據下面的調查結果,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

kind

reason

a few

quiet music

make them feel comfortable

many

musicians who can write their own lyrics

cool

most

music that they can dance to

full of energy

【優秀滿分範文】

Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.

A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.

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假如你是郭佳,你的美國筆友Linda給你寫了一封信,說她想給自己的漢語老師送一份禮物來表達自己的感激之情,但是她不知道中國的送禮習俗,所以請你給她一些建議。請根據下面的提示,用英語寫一封回信給她。

提示:1.要根據個人喜好選擇禮物;

2.禮物的包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙(wrapping paper);

3.不要送鍾、鞋或者梨。

要求:1.語意通順,條理清楚;

2.80詞左右。(信的格式和開頭已給出,不計入總詞數)

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Dear Linda,

I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.

Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Guo Jia

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剛到中國來學習不久的John應漢語老師的邀請去他家裡做客,因此John 向Bob請教相關禮儀。假設你是Bob,請你給John回一封電子郵件,告訴他一些注意事項。80詞左右,開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。

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Dear John,

I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.

First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.

Good luck!

Yours,

Bob

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假設上週六晚上,你們全家在一家飯店就餐。請你根據以下要點提示,用英語寫一篇短文,描述事情發生的經過,並適當加以評論。

要點提示:

1. 鄰桌年輕人大聲說話、吸菸。

2. 你請他們不要那樣做。

3. 他們不聽,反而嘲笑你。

4. 你認為:①他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。

②年輕人是祖國的未來,應該......

參考詞彙:嘲笑laugh at

要求:

1. 詞數80左右,短文開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。

2. 要點齊全,行為連貫,可適當發揮。

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Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.

We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.

In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.

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健康對我們來說非常重要,我們可以用很多方法來保持身體健康。請根據下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文,倡議“健康生活”,從三個方面說明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出,不計入總詞數,可適當發揮。

1

food

a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat...

2

exercise

do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games...

3

happiness

keep happy, make friends, smile...

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Good Ways to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.

Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.

Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.

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健康一直是人們關注的問題,我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為主題的主題班會,請根據以下內容談談你的看法。

1. 保持健康的重要性;

2. 保持健康的方法:多吃水果蔬菜;每天鍛鍊一小時;早睡早起;勤洗手;

3. 自己的看法(至少一條)。

注意:1.文中不能出現校名和自己的姓名;2.內容可適當擴展。3.字數60-80詞;4.文章開頭和結尾已給出,但不計入總詞數。

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Boys and girls,

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

Thank you.

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近20年來,各方面的調查表明:青少年的體質不斷下降。請你以“How to keep healty”為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文,說說你的看法和建議。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。

主要內容包括:

1. 體質下降的原因。如:eat too much junk food, have too much homework...

2. 合理的健康建議。如:should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(飲食平衡), enough sleep...

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How to keep healthy

Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.

Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health.

Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students should eat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.

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節約資源,保護環境,從身邊的小事做起。作為一名學生,我們應該怎樣看待“低碳”生活?請以“My low — carbon life”為題寫一篇短文,簡述自己對“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80詞左右。

提示:1.步行或騎自行車上學;

2.節約用水;

3.不用塑料袋;

4.節約用電;

5.充分使用紙張。

參考詞彙:on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap

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My low-carbon life

Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?

Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.

It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.

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為配合我市“禮儀宜賓(Charm Yibin)”活動的開展,某學校開展以“How to behave well?”為主題的英語作文,請你以一名中學生的身份寫一篇60-80詞的短文參賽。

內容包括:1.守時,不說髒話;2.禮貌待人,熱心助人;3.遵守交通規則,不亂扔垃圾;4...

注意:1.文中不能出現校名和自己的姓名;2.內容可適當擴充。

【優秀滿分範文】

How to behave well?

As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.

First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.

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有一點必須說明,經常有朋友噴說背誦很低級,沒有什麼效果,沒有什麼科學性等等,那我想說一句,如果還感覺背誦沒有效果,原因只有一個,那就是背誦的少了。繼續背誦,效果就出來了,就看得見了。

背下這些滿分作文進步看得見建議家長為孩子收藏

無論你現在上幾年級,這20篇英語範文都應該好好看一看。它們涵蓋了初中三年涉及到的所有英語寫作的話題,包括學習、健康、網絡、生活、環保、禮儀等,會為英語寫作提供清晰的思路和豐富的素材,多看、多記、多思,孩子一定能夠像這些作者一樣,寫出優秀滿分英語作文的!

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為了交流學習經驗,提高學習效率,《中學生英語輔導報》舉行了一次以How to be a good learner?為題的徵文比賽活動,請寫一篇80詞左右的短文談談你的看法。

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How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.

I think all these above will be helpful to us.

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親愛的同學,你的初中學習生活馬上就要結束了,請你以“My English Study”為題,談一下三年以來學習英語的心得體會。

要求:1.要點包括你在英語學習中所遇到的困難、解決的方法以及學習感悟;2.詞數80左右。

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My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.

In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

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父親節馬上就要到了,但是有些同學不知道送什麼禮物給父親。請根據下面的提示進行適當擴展,並向同學們提出一些建議。80詞左右,開頭和結尾以給出(不計入總詞數)。

提示:1.如果有足夠的零花錢,可以為父親買一些使用單不貴的東西,如領帶等:

2.還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如為父親準備一杯茶等他下班後飲用等。

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Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.

If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.

No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?

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請根據提示以“The Spring Festival”為題,寫一篇不少於80詞的英語短文。

提示:1.春節是中國最重要的節日;

2.人們大多回家過年,家庭成員團聚;

3.家人一起吃團年飯、看電視、拜訪親朋好友(friends and relatives);

4.孩子們喜歡春節。

【優秀滿分範文】

The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.

People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.

Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.

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假設Linda是你的好朋友,你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學回來,你們很高興見到彼此。請根據提示,簡要介紹Linda的變化。

提示:1.外貌:以前個子矮,短髮;現在個子高多了,長髮。

2.愛好:以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天;現在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步。

3.性格:以前外向;現在有些內向。

要求:1.不要逐字翻譯,適當發揮;

2.層次清晰,語言流暢;

3.80詞左右。

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Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.

She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.

I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.

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背景設定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael給他發來電子郵件,想了解康明家鄉的變化。假如你是康敏,請根據以下提示,給Miachael回一封電子郵件。

過去

生活條件差,道路狹窄,車輛少,住不好,吃不飽,聯繫不便......

現在

生活條件優越,道路寬,車輛多,住得舒適,手機普及......

要求:1.圍繞以上內容進行合理表述;

2.所表述的內容必須包含表中的所有方面;

3.詞數80詞左右,開頭語以給出(不計入詞數)。

參考詞彙:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通訊),telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy

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Dear Michael,

You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.

Sincerely

Kang Min

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隨著網絡的發展,人們消費觀念轉變,購物方式也在悄然地發生變化。“網購”成為一種時尚,越來越多的學生也正加入到網購群體中。請你根據以下表格的提示,寫一篇網上購物的文章。

優點

1. 足不出戶;節約時間;避免擁擠、勞累。

2. 價格通常比較便宜。

3. 可供選擇的範圍廣,品種多。

缺點

1. 只能看到圖片,看不到商品本身。

2. 容易購買大量不太需要的東西,造成浪費。

注意:1.所表述的內容必須包含表格中的所有方面;

2.80詞左右,開頭文章已給出,不計入總詞數。

參考詞彙:網購 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 導致 cause

【優秀滿分範文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

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假如你是李華,今年上初三了,現在的生活和以前大不一樣了。請你根據自身的情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己的變化。詞數:60-80。

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I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.

I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.

I really miss my old days.

背下這些滿分作文進步看得見建議家長為孩子收藏

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某英文報社正就青少年與父母關係這一話題開展題為How to keep a good relationship with parents的徵文活動。請你根據以下要點,寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。

要點:1.父母規矩太多,過於強調學習成績,不理解自己等問題;

2.你對這些問題的看法;

3.你與父母保持良好關係的做法。

【優秀滿分範文】

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.

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今天是母親節。假定你是李華,請給你的美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件,談談你將如何與母親一起度過這個特別的日子。要點如下:

1. 表述你與母親間的情感;

2. 為母親製作一張卡片;

3. 幫助母親做點事;

4. 陪母親散步等。

注意:1.詞數80左右;

2.請不要逐句翻譯,可適當發揮;

3.郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。

【優秀滿分範文】

Dear John,

It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?

I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.

Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.

What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

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英語課代表分發試卷的時候發現了一份沒有署名的試卷,成績為滿分。請你幫助課代表分析它會時誰的。

要求:1.設想當時的情景,適當擴展細節;

2.書寫工整,100詞左右。

參考詞彙:top student優等生;handwriting筆跡;full marks滿分

【優秀滿分範文】

we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.

Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.

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現在很多中學生都喜歡流行歌曲。請你根據下面的調查結果,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

kind

reason

a few

quiet music

make them feel comfortable

many

musicians who can write their own lyrics

cool

most

music that they can dance to

full of energy

【優秀滿分範文】

Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.

A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.

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假如你是郭佳,你的美國筆友Linda給你寫了一封信,說她想給自己的漢語老師送一份禮物來表達自己的感激之情,但是她不知道中國的送禮習俗,所以請你給她一些建議。請根據下面的提示,用英語寫一封回信給她。

提示:1.要根據個人喜好選擇禮物;

2.禮物的包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙(wrapping paper);

3.不要送鍾、鞋或者梨。

要求:1.語意通順,條理清楚;

2.80詞左右。(信的格式和開頭已給出,不計入總詞數)

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Dear Linda,

I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.

Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Guo Jia

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剛到中國來學習不久的John應漢語老師的邀請去他家裡做客,因此John 向Bob請教相關禮儀。假設你是Bob,請你給John回一封電子郵件,告訴他一些注意事項。80詞左右,開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。

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Dear John,

I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.

First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.

Good luck!

Yours,

Bob

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假設上週六晚上,你們全家在一家飯店就餐。請你根據以下要點提示,用英語寫一篇短文,描述事情發生的經過,並適當加以評論。

要點提示:

1. 鄰桌年輕人大聲說話、吸菸。

2. 你請他們不要那樣做。

3. 他們不聽,反而嘲笑你。

4. 你認為:①他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。

②年輕人是祖國的未來,應該......

參考詞彙:嘲笑laugh at

要求:

1. 詞數80左右,短文開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。

2. 要點齊全,行為連貫,可適當發揮。

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Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.

We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.

In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.

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健康對我們來說非常重要,我們可以用很多方法來保持身體健康。請根據下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文,倡議“健康生活”,從三個方面說明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出,不計入總詞數,可適當發揮。

1

food

a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat...

2

exercise

do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games...

3

happiness

keep happy, make friends, smile...

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Good Ways to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.

Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.

Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.

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健康一直是人們關注的問題,我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為主題的主題班會,請根據以下內容談談你的看法。

1. 保持健康的重要性;

2. 保持健康的方法:多吃水果蔬菜;每天鍛鍊一小時;早睡早起;勤洗手;

3. 自己的看法(至少一條)。

注意:1.文中不能出現校名和自己的姓名;2.內容可適當擴展。3.字數60-80詞;4.文章開頭和結尾已給出,但不計入總詞數。

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Boys and girls,

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

Thank you.

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近20年來,各方面的調查表明:青少年的體質不斷下降。請你以“How to keep healty”為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文,說說你的看法和建議。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。

主要內容包括:

1. 體質下降的原因。如:eat too much junk food, have too much homework...

2. 合理的健康建議。如:should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(飲食平衡), enough sleep...

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How to keep healthy

Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.

Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health.

Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students should eat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.

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節約資源,保護環境,從身邊的小事做起。作為一名學生,我們應該怎樣看待“低碳”生活?請以“My low — carbon life”為題寫一篇短文,簡述自己對“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80詞左右。

提示:1.步行或騎自行車上學;

2.節約用水;

3.不用塑料袋;

4.節約用電;

5.充分使用紙張。

參考詞彙:on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap

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My low-carbon life

Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?

Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.

It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.

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為配合我市“禮儀宜賓(Charm Yibin)”活動的開展,某學校開展以“How to behave well?”為主題的英語作文,請你以一名中學生的身份寫一篇60-80詞的短文參賽。

內容包括:1.守時,不說髒話;2.禮貌待人,熱心助人;3.遵守交通規則,不亂扔垃圾;4...

注意:1.文中不能出現校名和自己的姓名;2.內容可適當擴充。

【優秀滿分範文】

How to behave well?

As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.

First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.

背下這些滿分作文進步看得見建議家長為孩子收藏
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