乾貨:會學不會用,你怎麼能寫得好英語作文?!

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乾貨:會學不會用,你怎麼能寫得好英語作文?!

“寫”是我們英語運用能力的綜合體現。很多同學到了高中,已學習了數年英語,寫起作文來還是難於下筆,背誦了單詞短語、各種句型、甚至是範文,卻不知道怎樣活用到英語寫作中去。

本文以譯林版牛津《高中英語》教材中部分課文為例,從詞彙句法篇章結構三大方面,談談如何將平時課堂所學,有效遷移到寫作練習中去!內容略長,請自備小板凳~

“活學活用詞彙”

怎麼用?現學現用!

需要大家在日常的課堂學習中,注意整理積累重點詞彙詞組,及其多種表達方式,可以採用轉述課文、或寫摘要、改寫等方法進行寫作訓練。有課本作為“支架”,寫作既不會感覺無話可寫,還能及時在文中運用新學詞彙以及詞彙的多樣表達,妥妥的亮點呀~

乾貨:會學不會用,你怎麼能寫得好英語作文?!

譯林版牛津高中《英語》模塊五 Unit 2

文章主題:經濟發展和環境保護孰輕孰重(辯論性質的文章)

詞彙整理

open the floor for discussion = discuss something freely;

sb. hold the view that = sb. think;

sb. have the belief that = sb. believe;

cut back on production = reduce production;

as a consequence = as a result;

be concerned about = care about;

sb.be against sth.= sb. hold the opposite view

寫作訓練:將課文內容改編成一篇正反觀點的小議論文,儘可能多地使用新詞彙。

學生習作示例·詞彙使用:

As for the question of whether we should develop the economy or protect the environment,we opened the floor for discussion today.

Ms Linshuiqing,from the Green Society,holds the view that it is our duty to cut back on production and reduce the things we make and buy. There aremany reasons accounting for it.

...

On the contrary,Mr Qian Liwei,a business consultant,has the belief that a healthy environment and development should be possible at the same time,we should be concerned about the present situation of our environment but people are more important than fish and trees.

...

“活學活用句型結構”

課文是最好的寫作範文,重難點內容知識與各階段學生的學情能力相匹配,並且造句典型。能夠把教材課文中的句子巧妙轉化成自己的句子,作文質量直接提升一個level呀~

乾貨:會學不會用,你怎麼能寫得好英語作文?!

譯林版牛津高中《英語》模塊六 Unit 1

主題:名人介紹,著名喜劇演員 Billy Crystal

句型老師課堂整理

(1)... One such person is Billy Crystal.

(2)One little-known fact is that...

(3)It is because....

(4)One reason why.... is that...

(5)It seems appropriate that...

(6)... is popular with ... and has the ability to...

寫作訓練:活用課文句型介紹一位名人

學生習作·Albert Einstein介紹:

Many famous people have shown their great talent and intelligence when they were very young. One such person is Albert Einstein,a great scientist.

His maths was very good when he was still a little child. One little-known fact is that Einstein didn’t speak until comparatively late in childhood,and he remained a reluctant talker until the age of 7. It is because he had Asperger’s syndrome,a disease that affects language and behavioral development in children.

One reason why he was well-known to people was that he created his famous Theory of Relativity . He was popular and had the ability to create many amazing wonders! It seems appropriate that he was awarded the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1921.

“活學活用篇章結構”

一篇文章,是表達整體概念的語言單位,具有一定的行文邏輯與結構,任何文章都是創造和部分模仿的結果。我們在課文學習過程中,不僅需要學習積累新詞彙、新句法,更需要對課文篇章進行整體把握,對篇章寫作結構進行有意識有意義的模仿、借鑑。經過官方鑑定過的文章結構,還能有錯麼~

乾貨:會學不會用,你怎麼能寫得好英語作文?!

“我再出來舉個栗子,各位應該都沒意見吧”

譯林版牛津高中《英語》模塊五 Unit 2

主題:What friendship means to me?

課文邏輯結構:典型三段式議論文

邏輯結構提煉如下:

乾貨:會學不會用,你怎麼能寫得好英語作文?!

寫作訓練:以“What is happiness?”為題,模仿上面的課文結構寫一篇作文。

寫作提綱參考如下:

乾貨:會學不會用,你怎麼能寫得好英語作文?!

學生習作示例:

[段1 Introduction]

What is happiness ? Different people hold different views. To some,possessing a great deal of money is the secret to happiness. To others,happiness means achieving success in something,such as meeting a goal. To those who have been injured of struggling with a physical disability,happiness can simply mean a day without suffering,or just being alive.

[段2 Means of happiness]

From my point of view,happiness means giving aid to others. When the poor receives our assistance,their lives will improve. Smiles will appear on their faces,and this is the best reward we can get from helping others. When we see their happy smile,we will be happy as well. In addition,being loved by others can also lead you to happiness.Courage from your parents when frustrated,care from your lover when ill,help from your friends when in trouble... all of these will make you the happiest person in the world.Last but not least,the greatest happiness lies in one’s satisfaction with one’s surroundings. As long as we can look at things with a happy heart,we can be happy. It has nothing to do with the mount of money we have.

[段3 Conclusion]

In conclusion,happiness is the most precious thing in the world. In fact,happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

本文內容與素材參考:《學習遷移理論在高中英語寫作教學中的運用探究》,劉小平,《英語教師》,2017年第2期

叨一叨:有時候寫作文難於下筆,可能只是因為你懶。。。勤奮的同學已經在動筆了!

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