外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

今天你打開的這篇文章,通往的是作家們的異世界。還是英語作家的。

一位在西班牙的IT青年,一位主修英語的美國德州大學生,一位新加坡從事醫保行業的才俊,下班下課回到家,脫去一天的疲憊,夜深人靜,打開電腦來,埋頭碼字。

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

按下“上傳/發佈”鍵的一瞬間,他們也不知道這些文字將把他們指向何方,或許是東方,或許是潛伏在世界各國的粉絲同道,或許還有“至少高過每月工資的”收入,還是美金結算的。

就因為沉迷動漫、遊戲和中國網絡小說,他們不知不覺入坑,進而自己提起筆,從模仿到原創,然後就火了,在中國人創辦的國際版網絡文學網站webnovel.com上開啟了人生新篇章。

從武俠、仙俠、歷史、穿越文中衍生出的網絡文學,現在已經是許多電視電影的劇本來源(《甄嬛傳》《琅琊榜》《延禧攻略》等等),改編後行銷歐美東南亞。

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

最近又多出了種田、職業或者是幾種混合等新類型,也新有了不少向高鐵、扶貧、非遺傳承等現實題材致敬的作品。

作協有網絡文學分會。中國網絡小說已成為傳說中的新四大國際文化現象之一。

來看一段向海外介紹中國網絡小說的小視頻,你能猜出幾種類型:

關於外國讀者對中國網絡文學的濃厚興趣,我們也曾報道過:

今天就講三位年輕外國作者的故事。還有英語味兒的原創網絡小說試讀:熟悉的配方,全新的體驗。

01

來自西班牙的帥小夥Alemillach今年24歲,住在巴塞羅那,是一名電腦工程師。一直愛好文學,一直嘗試寫作,但總覺傳統寫作無法滿足他馳騁的想象力。

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

西班牙網絡作家Alemillach

開始看英語翻譯的中國網絡小說之後,他覺得自己似乎找到了一種符合動漫遊戲愛好者思維的表達方式和平臺,於是開始動筆寫一部“融合了一些西方元素和中國元素”的小說。

問他為何用英語而不是母語創作呢?

他回答得相當實際:

Because of the visibility. There isn’t any platform like Webnovel focused in this kind of web novels in Spanish. Moreover, there are also more people who can read English than Spanish.因為能見度更高,平臺更好,目前還沒有一個像Webnovel這樣的西班牙語網絡小說平臺。再說了,世界上能看懂英語的人更多嘛。他的讀者遍佈美、德、東南亞等地,而一開始,他沒想太多,只是想寫好一部故事而已。

後來他也積極參與與讀者的互動,借鑑讀者的反饋,一天碼1500-1600詞英文,也就是每天1-2章的樣子,像中國網文作家一樣。

這位西班牙的青年說從網文獲得的收入比全職工作一個月還多(“more than a full-month job”)。

他的作品《最終願望系統》(Last Wish System)目前已累計超800萬點擊。

《最終願望系統》

Last Wish System

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

作品簡介

In a universe where the great experts can reincarnate, Yale Roanmad reincarnated with almost no memories of his past life and didn't know who he was.

Despite the problem with his memories, Yale had obtained a strange legacy from his own past life the Last Wish System.

Yale, who remembered the pain of dying, decided to turn strong to avoid suffering the same pain again. Moreover, he also decided to investigate his own past life to remember who he was.

Yale知道自己重生了,但卻想不起太多自己前世的記憶。並且,他腦子裡突然擁有了一個最終系統,可以做任務,學知識。通過不斷地練習升級,他一步步成長變強,自己前世的身世之謎也逐漸浮出水面。Alemillach說,“我的故事裡面的主角是來自於另一個世界的化身(reincarnation),他不像很多故事的主角那樣會武功,他是一個有著前世記憶的人,但是到目前為止他還不太清楚他的前世具體是什麼人(He didn’t have memories of who he is in the past life)。”

這樣,讀者們就會非常想了解主角有什麼力量和弱點,於是一直跟隨著主角的成長去看他的故事。

目前,小說更新到400多章,試讀一段,也歡迎對照中國風試譯哦。

Chapter 401: A New and Cruel Trump Card

Yale looked at his father with doubts in his face as he didn't feel that failing to see a mere marriage was enough to kill someone, but the fear in his father's voice seemed real.

"Don't doubt about my words! Your mother is very lovely, but she is fearsome when she is angry. Moreover, given her level, I can't do anything to stop her. Since she can't come to see you right now, she entrusted me taking care of you without affecting your fate, and your mother was eager to see you marry someone, so I am sure that if you marry without me being present, she will be angry. In fact, I am already fearing how will she react when she learns that you needed to reincarnate and that I was unable to help you because I was trapped..."

02

來自新加坡的Moloxiv,今年29歲,從事醫保行業。他的創作是從玩遊戲開始的。他自己也是網文讀者,會在地鐵上,或者睡覺前刷一刷文。他會講一點中文,但是不太多。

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

新加坡網絡作家Moloxiv

受一起玩遊戲的朋友的鼓勵,他開始每天上傳1200-2000詞英文,最多的時候一天3000詞。

他的作品有著輕鬆愉快的氛圍,剛上傳的第一週,收到了大量的好評,作者自己也很震驚。

《第一祕境供應商》

Number One Dungeon Supplier

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

作品簡介

這是一個現代背景的帶有武俠元素的故事(modern context with inspiration from Chinese wuxia novels),主角是一個剛從大學畢業的青年人,他的祖父去世了,並在去世以後給他留下了一個系統,讓他通過這個系統去追求夢想(a system for people to pursue dreams),成為一個祕境供應商。其他人可以進入他的祕境,在類似虛擬現實的體驗中戰鬥。故事融入了武俠還有修仙的元素。

作者很開心地分享說,這個祕境裡還有美食,還有熊貓的元素(panda element)。就像他自己做的tags:

Cultivation, System, Business, Fantasy, Monster Catching, a little bit on food and a tinge of romance.他說:“每次有熊貓元素出現在我的故事裡面,我的讀者都會非常喜歡,非常激動。”

原作試讀:

"Jin, I guess if you're reading this letter, then I'm already dead."

Xie Jin gripped the letter tightly as its words hit him. He continued to pack up the furniture and other odds and ends that were left behind in the almost-empty house of his grandfather, Xie Ming, who had passed on recently.

The lawyer who was handling the inheritance of his only caretaker had given Jin a key to open his grandfather's safe. Jin's mother had given birth to him when both she and her partner were in their late teens, but unfortunately, they were brutally murdered by a rogue, psychopathic cultivator.

That's right. In today's world, anyone could become a cultivator so long as they had the potential. Those with sufficient cultivation could run at high speeds that rivaled modern-day transportation systems or even fly. That said, public transport was still available for both commoners and cultivators anyway.

However, that did not mean that commoners (those who were without cultivation, or who had not yet awakened their abilities) were at a disadvantage against modern-day cultivators.

In the interest of keeping safety and order, the top ten most supreme cultivators during the golden age of cultivation had convened and acted on their collective wisdom, thus drastically changing the laws of nature. As a consequence, all babies that were born after that change had their Dantian chi point solidified, and all humans — cultivated or otherwise — could never truly be killed.

小說目前也進入300多章,共有超過600多萬的點擊。

Moloxiv很瞭解他的讀者:

Overall, it was interesting to see from the comments that I have attracted a variety of readers. Those who just read for fun, those who just want a simple plot, those read things without analyzing and those who appreciate the hidden symbolism I had placed throughout the novel.我很喜歡看評論區的各色讀者反映。有的只是為了一樂,有的只想看簡單的情節推動,有的完全不分析,有的卻能看出並欣賞我藏在字裡行間的隱喻。

03

來自美國德州的Logan,筆名AuthorWiz,可能將英語寫作的中國風網絡小說的品質推向了一個更高的臺階,因為他專業就是英語,輔修漢語。

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

美國網絡作家Logan

他的小說《重生:虛無進化》(Reborn: Evolving From Nothing),是目前的當紅網文,在Webnovel排第三,吸引了超過900萬的點擊閱讀。

《重生:虛無進化》

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

作品簡介

Dorian was out celebrating his college graduation when a car slammed into him, and darkness took hold.

He awoke to find himself in a strange new body, in a strange new world.

One world among 30,000 fantastical worlds, where the mighty rule, where mystic beasts walk the earth, and magic spells warp reality.

For Dorian to survive in these worlds, unfettered and free, living by his strong moral code, he will need great strength.

He must make use of his strange new body and Evolve.

作者Logan說,他因為看不到滿意的重生和進化小說,於是決定自己“產糧”:

I love the concept of Evolving and Reincarnation. I’ve always wanted to read a really good Evolution novel, where creatures Evolve and grow, gaining abilities and powers. However, I could never quite find one with a really good or interesting plot. I’ve certainly read a few that started strong, but many of them seemed to fizzle off, or become Slice-Of-Life! There is nothing wrong with that, but it isn’t quite to my taste, so… I decided to take matters into my own hands, and write my own!我很喜歡進化和重生的概念,我總是想讀一部真正好的關於進化的小說,小說中的生物進化、成長,獲得力量與能力。然而,我一直沒有找到一部完全符合我心意的有趣的進化類小說。當然,我也讀到過一些開始很不錯的,但是大部分到後來就不對了,或者變成了更日常向、生活類的小說。並不是說這樣不好,但是這不是我所想要的。因此,我決定自己來創作一部小說,自己來寫出我很真正想要看的小說。他的文學之旅也是從閱讀開始的,因為喜歡奇幻和冒險類型的故事,Logan最開始接觸到的中國網絡小說是《鬥破蒼穹》(Battle Through the Heavens)和《盤龍》(Coiling Dragon)。接下來是《我欲封天》(I Shall Seal the Heavens),讀得越來越多,就愛上了網絡小說。
外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

“我的小說Reborn: Evolving From Nothing也極大地受到了中國網絡小說的影響,許多靈感都來源於中國網絡小說。還有小說中的人物靈感有一些也是來自於中國古典經典形象,比如孫悟空,”Logan說。

原文試讀,文本確實頗有些武俠之風:

Clink.

Clink.

Clink.

An ominous ringing sound roused Dorian. As he began waking up, he felt an odd pressure pushing down on him, constricting him. He tried, and failed, to open his eyes as he came fully awake, his mind awash with confusion.

Clink.

Clink.

Clink.

A wash of memories swept over him as he tried to understand where he was and what was happening.

He was a fresh graduate from college, an aerospace engineer celebrating graduation with a night out. Dorian strained his mind, and vaguely remembered crossing a local street, and hearing a loud screeching noise.

The very last thing Dorian could recall was a wave of pain crashing into his side, and then a sudden, fading darkness that overwhelmed all.

"Did I die? Am I dead?" He mumbled, or tried to. When he tried to speak, however, all that came out was a gargling echo.

Clink.

Clink.

Clink.

The ringing sound continued for several more minutes as Dorian struggled to see or speak.

After a few minutes of effort, Dorian figured out that while he still couldn't see or speak, he was able to move, albeit very slowly. By focusing his will on moving his body forward, he felt himself sluggishly start to drift forward.

Through this, Dorian determined that he no longer had a human body. Or, if he did, it was one that was horribly maimed beyond all recognition.

04

據2018年的中國官方數字,二十年來,中國的網絡文學發展迅猛,擁有1300餘萬名作者,1600多萬部作品,近4億讀者。

而創建於2017年5月的Webnovel,截至2019年3月,上線300餘部英文翻譯作品,擁有200餘譯者或譯者組,累計訪問用戶已超2000萬。不到兩年時間,已經孕育出了一定數量的原創英文作者,還有可能開放其他語種。

或許資深網文譯者,來自新加坡的溫宏文Jeremy Oon,筆名Cktalon,能用自身的體驗和經歷來解釋中國式網文魅力何在。

一開始是新鮮:

It at first completely overturned my understanding of what traditional and serious literature was. “Reading enjoyment” and “ardor-inducement” was my first impression of online literature. When I delved deeper, these stories about how one “starts from zero” facilitates one's immersion. As such, the qualities of the protagonist, such as the eagerness to improve, allowed me to be very willing to accompany his growth and experience his plethora of emotions.東方玄幻作品完完全全顛覆了我以往對於傳統文學和嚴肅文學的認知。“爽”“熱血”是我對網文的第一感知。再深入探究,這些“從零開始草根崛起”的故事很容易讓我有了代入感,而主角身上那些積極向上的品格也讓我願意陪伴著他成長,經歷他的喜怒哀樂。Just like the protagonist, we are but tiny characters in this massive world, yet he is able to do his life over again, giving us endless imagination towards the entire story.就像主角一樣,我們同樣是不起眼的小人物,但他卻能夠重生一回,這讓我對整個故事有了無限的想象。It can be said that online literature itself contains a charm that is able to connect common points in the human psyche. Brotherhood, friendship, loyalty, desire to be recognized, et cetera. This freshness that exceeds the limits of one’s imagination also allows readers to continue trying out new works.網絡文學本身的魅力在於它很好地連接了人性中的共同點,兄弟情、友情、忠誠、渴望獲得認可等等。同時,突破想象力的新鮮感也吸引著讀者去不斷嘗試。溫宏文也指出目前也出了不少描寫中國當代生活的網文,能讓世界各地的讀者更加貼近中國的現實。

翻譯是跨文化交際。有一個700多中國特色文化詞彙的庫已經建好。

來看看其中一些詞的翻譯:

金丹 Golden Core

元神 Nascent Soul

神仙 Immortals

後天 Postnatal

先天 Connate

天劫 Heavenly Tribulation

靈寶 Numinous treasure

三千世界 Trichiliocosm

真仙 Perfected Immortal

太乙 Primordial Unity

大羅 Zenith Heaven

築基 Foundation Establishment

法器 Dharma artifact

殺氣 Murderous Aura

今天(3月10日)正好是金庸先生的誕辰,他的《倚天屠龍記》正在播出,大眾翻譯版的英語《射鵰英雄傳》第一卷在英國大賣,第二卷剛剛上市。

外國人迷上中國網絡小說後,開始用英語寫重生文了

剛剛西班牙的Alemillach同學還發來微信,說他已經辭掉程序員的工作,專心在家當網絡作家,唯一有點擔心的是長期不見太陽,身體扛不住:

I have already quit my job as a programmer to spend all my time writing, so my lifestyle changed a lot. Working at home is pretty good, but I need to schedule my time to go outside. If I get too immersed in writing and I forget about seeing the sun, it will be bad for my health.謹以這些作為武俠的“徒子徒孫”的網絡小說們,包括來自外邦的,向先生致敬。

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