'小升初優秀範文85篇背誦默寫比風裡來雨裡去輔導班爽多了（下）'

65. Holiday Life

Hi! My English name is Tom. I had a very good time in this winter vacation.

First, I went to Hong Kong. I played in Disneyland and Ocean Park. I enjoyed a fantastic voyage on the Ocean Express. I enjoyed the Mine Train and the Flying Swing, too.

Second, I went to China Science and Technology museum.

Last, I went to grandpa's house and played with my friends.

I am so happy.

假日生活

你好！我的英文名是湯姆。這個寒假我玩得很開心。

首先，我去了香港。我在迪斯尼樂園和海洋公園玩過。我在海上快車上度過了一段美妙的旅程。我也很喜歡礦產火車和鞦韆兩個遊玩項目。

第二，我去了中國科技館。

最後，我去了爺爺家，和朋友們一起玩。

我是如此的幸福。

66.It is my living day.

I get up at six in the morning. I have milk and eggs for breakfast. Then I go to school by bus. I have four lessons in the morning. I have lunch at home. I have two lessons in the afternoon. After school I do my homework. I go to bed at nine in the evening.

我一天的生活

我早上六點起床。 我早餐吃牛奶和雞蛋。 然後我坐公共汽車去學校。 我上午有四節課。 我在家吃午飯。 我下午有兩節課。 放學後我做家庭作業。 我晚上九點上床睡覺。

67. My school

Welcome to my school. Look! The teachers' offices are on your right, And the library is on your left. There are many books in the library. Go straight, and you can see the classrooms on your left. There are many classrooms in our school. In front of the classrooms, there is a little park, It is very beautiful. The playground is next to the park and the classrooms, It's so big. Students often play on the playground. My school is very nice, Do you like it？

歡迎來到我的學校。看！教師辦公室在右邊，圖書館在左邊，圖書館裡有很多書。直走，你能看到教室在左邊。我們學校有很多教室，教室前面有一個小公園，它很漂亮。操場在公園和教室附近，它很大，學生經常在操場上玩。我的學校很好，你喜歡它嗎？

重點短語：welcome to…；on your right，go straight；on your left； in front of； next to；on the playground．

68. My last weekend

Last Saturday，my parents and I went to the park．First，we watched the flowers．Then，we climbed the mountains．Finally，we flew the kite．In the afternoon，we visited my grandparents．Except me，other family members talked a lot．I played outside．In the evening，we had supper together．

Last Sunday，I cleaned my room．After that，my friends and I went to the zoo to took some pictures．We played happily．And at five o'clock，we went home．I felt happy and tired．

What do you think of my last weekend？

我的上週末

上週六，我和我的父母去了公園。首先，我們看了鮮花；然後，我們爬了山；最後，我們放了風箏。當天下午，我們看望了我的爺爺奶奶。除了我，其他的家人在聊天，而我在外面玩。晚上，我們一起吃了晚飯。

上週日，我打掃了我的房間。之後，我和我的朋友去動物園拍了一些照片。我們玩得很開心。五點鐘，我們回家了，我既感到高興又感覺疲憊。

你覺得我上個週末怎麼樣？

重點詞彙：weekend週末，mountains山，pictures照片。

重點句型：

1．we climbed the mountains我們爬了山。

2．常用句型：①I felt…我感到… ②What do you think of…你覺得…怎麼樣？

69. My Nature Park

There is a nature park in front of my village．It's not big．There is a lake in the park．There are many fish in it．There are many trees beside the lake．There are many flowers under the trees． The air is nice and clean．I like my nature park．

我的自然公園

在我村的前面有一個自然公園，它不大。公園裡有一個湖，裡面有很多魚。湖的一邊有很多樹，樹底下開了很多花。那裡的空氣很清新，我喜歡我的自然公園。

重點詞彙：

in front of，above，behind，under，beside，flowers，trees，lake等

重要句型：There is …，There are…

70.

My weekend

I have a good weekend．On the weekend I often wash my clothes．Sometimes I play football．And I usually read books and do my homework．I like my weekend．And what about you？

我的週末

我過了一個很棒的週末。週末我經常洗衣服，有時候也踢足球。我也經常讀書和做作業。我喜歡我的週末，你的呢？

重點詞彙：often，wash clothes，play football，read books．

重點句型：I often…，Sometimes I…In the morning I usually…

71. My friend

I have a friend．Her name is Amy．She is 13 years old．She is from American．She is thin and short．She has long hairs and big eyes．She has a small nose．She likes math very much and she is good at it．And I like her very much．We are good friends.

我的朋友

我有一個朋友。她的名字叫艾米。她13歲。她來自美國。她又瘦又矮。她有長頭髮和大眼睛。她有一個小鼻子。她非常喜歡數學，而且擅長數學。我非常喜歡她。我們是好朋友。

重點詞彙：America，thin and short，long hair，big eyes，

Small nose，like，math，like，her，very much

72. This is my day

Today is Sunday．First，I get up early at 6：30．I brush my teeth and wash my face．Next，I have my breakfast at 7：00．Then，I clean my room．After that，I play with my best friend．We go to the zoo together．This's my day．What about you？

我的一天

今天是星期天。首先，我六點半起床，刷牙和洗臉。接下來，七點鐘吃早餐，然後，我打掃了我的房間。在那之後，我和我最好的朋友一起出去玩。我們一起去動物園。這是我的一天，你的呢？

重點詞彙：have breakfast吃早餐，clean room打掃房間，play with sb和某人一起玩耍

73. My Habits

I have many habits．For example，I always read books everyday．I often go to the park and fly a kite．I sometimes do my homework at home．But I never swim in the winter．These are my habits．What about you？

我的習慣

我有很多習慣：例如我每天都會讀書，我經常去公園放風箏，我有時在家做作業，但是我從來不在冬天游泳。這些是我的習慣，你的呢？

重點詞彙：always，often，sometimes，never，read books，go to the park，watch TV，fly a kite，swim in the winter，do my homework

重點句型：

I always read books everyday我總是每天讀書；I sometimes do my homework at home我有時在家做作業。

74. My Holiday Plan

The summer holiday is coming．I am very excited．Now let me tell you my plan．

I will travel to Sanya with my mother and father during this summer holiday．We will go there by plane．I will go shopping with my mother in the evening．During the day，we will go swimming．We will take many photos and buy many special gifts．

I believe we will have a good time there．

我的假期計劃

暑假快到了，我很興奮，現在讓我告訴你我的計劃：

我會在這個暑假期間跟著我的父母去三亞。我們將坐飛機到達那裡，晚上我和媽媽準備一起去購物。白天，我們計劃去游泳，我們會拍很多照片，買很多特別的禮物。

我相信我們會在那裡度過美好的時光。

重點詞彙：want to，travel，go shopping，swim，like，by plane，mother，father．

My Holiday Plan

重點句型：The summer holiday is coming．暑假快到了；We will go there by plane我們將乘飛機去那。

75. My Favourite Holiday

My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival．It's the Chinese New Year．For the Spring Festival，we buy new clothes，clean the doors，windows and sweep the floors．And we make dumplings．Kids get lucky money．That's interesting．I love the Spring Festival．

我最喜歡的節日

我最喜歡的節日是春節，它是中國的新年。因為春節我們可以買新衣服、擦門、擦窗戶和打掃地板，而且我們可以包餃子。孩子們可以得到壓歲錢，非常有趣。我愛春節！

重點詞彙：the Spring Festival（春節）， buy new clothes（新衣服） ，clean the doors（擦門） ，clean the windows （擦窗戶）， sweep the floors（打掃地板），make dumplings（包餃子）， lucky money（壓歲錢）．

For the Spring Festival，we buy new clothes，clean the doors， windows and sweep the floors．And we make dumplings． 因為春節我們可以買新衣服、擦門、擦窗戶和打掃地板．而且我們可以包餃子．（並列句）

76. 請你用4-6句話介紹你熟悉的城市，比較這座城市的過去和現在。

提示：famous， old， small， big， new， now， then

【分析】本文介紹熟悉的城市，介紹過去的情況時時態用一般過去時，介紹現在的情況時時態用一般現在時，人稱用第三人稱。

重點詞彙、短語：an old city一座古老的城市

重點句型： It is very famous．它很有名。

【解答】

Guangzhou is an old city， It is very famous. The park was small then. It is big now. The street was old then， But it is new now.

廣州是一個古老的城市，它很有名。那時公園很小，現在它很大。街道是舊的，但是它現在是新的。

77. 請給你的好朋友寫一封信，在信中你可以介紹一下你的家庭。要求：語法正確，語句通順，不少於40個單詞。

【分析】這裡介紹自己的一些基本信息，時態用一般現在時，人稱用第一人稱。

重點詞彙：a photo of…的照片；How about 怎麼樣。

重點句型：Do you want to know my family．你想了解我的家人嗎？

【解答】

Dear Amy，

Do you want to know my family？Look，this is a photo of my family．The tallest man is my father．And I'm the shortest．My mother is thinner than my father．How about your family？

Yours，

Mary

親愛的艾米，

你想認識我的家人嗎？看，這是我家人的照片．最高的男人是我爸爸．我是最矮的．我的媽媽比我爸爸瘦．你的家人呢？

你的，

瑪麗

【點評】寫作時，注意多用簡單句子，注意時態，平時注意一下語法，多背單詞和短語，積累詞彙量．多讀課文，增強語感．

78. 假如你是老師，請你設計學校開放日的計劃，至少寫5句話。

The parents will visit our school on the Open Day．First．

【分析】

1．全文通用一般將來時（will+動詞原形）

2．重點詞組：the Open Day（開放日），visit the classroom（參觀教室），the hall（大廳），go to the playground（去操場），play games（玩遊戲）

3．關鍵句型．主要是陳述句（分三個部分）

First，the parents will visit the classroom．Ms．Zhang will tell them about the lessons．

首先，父母們會參觀教室，張老師將會跟他們說明功課。

Next，they'll go to the hall．The children will sing for their parents．

其次，他們將會去大廳，孩子們會唱歌給他們的父母聽。

Finally，they'll go to the playground．

最後，他們將去操場。

【解答】

The parents will visit our school on the Open Day．First，the parents will visit the classroom．Ms．Zhang will tell them about the lessons．Next，they'll go to the hall．The children will sing for their parents．Finally，they'll go to the playground．The children will play games with their parents．

孩子們的父母親將會在開放日來學校參觀。首先，父母們會參觀教室，張老師將會跟他們說明功課；其次，他們將會去大廳，孩子們會唱歌給他們的父母聽；最後，他們將去操場，孩子們將會和他們的父母一起做遊戲。

【點評】英語作文，是指用英語針對某一幅圖畫寫出一篇文章，是英語考試最常見的一種題目類型，英語作文要求閱讀、寫作比較高，英文書寫應符合書寫規範，英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀，字母的大小和字母之間的距離要勻稱．書寫應做到字形秀麗漂亮，通篇勻稱和諧．掌握寫作中句子的人稱時態，在細節描寫方面還要多反思，有時是轉折關係，同時要掌握一些語法知識和基本句型．

79. 快畢業了，你有什麼話想對你的同學說嗎？把它寫在下面。

【分析】本文是一篇應用文，主要可以寫明信片的形式寫出畢業時對同學的感謝和祝福．時態可用一般現在時。

重點單詞/短語：thank you， appreciate， wish， hope

【解答】

Dear Xiao Wang，

Thank you for your help with my study and life in this 6 years in school．I appreciate the time that spent together with you．I hope that you will have a fresh new start in middle school．Wish you a good luck and happy life．Don't forget to connect with me often．

Yours，

Xiao Ke

親愛的小王：

感謝你這6年來在學校的學習和生活中給我的幫助．我非常珍惜曾和你在一起的時光．我希望你升入中學有一個全新的開始．祝願你擁有好運和快樂的生活！不要忘了常聯繫！

你的好友：

小柯

【點評】作文題首先要審好題，儘量用簡語法單句去寫．注意用熟悉的單詞，語法正確、書寫規範．

80．以"My hobbies"為題，寫一篇小作文，要求不少於30個單詞．

提示：I have some hobbies．I like…Hobbies can make me happy．

My hobbies

I have some hobbies．I like playing football，listening to music and drawing pictures．【說明自己愛好廣泛】When I am at school，I often play football with my friends．I think playing football is very interesting and exciting．When I am at home．I like listening to music．Sometimes I like drawing pictures．At weekends，I like going shopping with my parents．【逐一說明自己的愛好】

Hobbies can make me happy．【愛好的作用】Do you have any hobbies？【引發話題】

【分析】

根據開頭句子I have some hobbies．"我有多種愛好"可知，要使用第一人稱來寫這篇作文．hobbies是複數，所以就要寫出自己的多個愛好；結尾句子Hobbies can make me happy．含義是"愛好讓我高興．"所以要寫的愛好必須是健康的、積極向上的！表達愛好時通常運用的動詞形式是like doing something（表示愛好時like 後面要用動詞的﹣ing 形式）。

【解答】

My hobbies

I have some hobbies．I like playing football，listening to music and drawing pictures．When I am at school，I often play football with my friends．I think playing football is very interesting and exciting．When I am at home．I like listening to music．Sometimes I like drawing pictures．At weekends，I like going shopping with my parents．

Hobbies can make me happy．Do you have any hobbies?

【點評】本題考查學生的寫作能力。靈活運用動詞的﹣ing 形式來表示愛好：寫作時必須緊扣題目要求和已給出的句型提示，並靈活使用一些連詞和表示頻度的副詞；書寫時儘量書寫自己會寫的短語以便容易得分；還要注意居首字母的大寫、句末合適的標點符號！

81.

My family

My name is Mary. I come from China. I am a Chinese girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.

我叫瑪麗。我來自中國。我是一箇中國女孩。我是個學生。我在五年級。我喜歡我的老師。她的英語很好。我家有四個人。我有一個雙胞胎妹妹。我父親是個醫生。我媽媽是個老師。我非常愛他們。他們也愛我。

82. My net friend

I am Tony. I a have a computer. I have a net friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend?

我的網友

我是託尼。我有一臺電腦。我有個網友。他叫傑克。他12歲。他是個學生。他喜歡上網。我們經常在聊天室裡交談。我們用英語交談。我的英語現在很好。他是個好孩子。我非常喜歡他。你想有網友嗎？

重點詞彙：computer

net friend 網友

talk with each other(互相交談)

in the chat room (在聊天室)

talk in English (用英語交談)

83. A shopping day

Yesterday was Jack’s shopping day. He went shopping with his mother.

They went to the Happy Shop . They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4 yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at Mr. Chen’s Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle Eddy’s Store . They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy car. It’s 105 yuan. They were very happy.

購物日

昨天是傑克的購物日。他和母親一起去購物。

他們去了快樂商店。他們買了一些糖果。他們是4元。他們買了一卷衛生紙。他們在陳先生的店裡買了一盒冰淇淋，在艾迪叔叔的店裡買了一瓶洗髮水和一雙襪子。他們去了藍色的大百貨公司。他們買了一輛玩具車。105元。他們很高興。

84. 假設你是May, 請用不少於60個單詞來向你的筆友Jay介紹你的家庭情況，請在文中使用3個最高級和2個比較級。

範文：

Hi, Jay,

I’m very happy to be your pen-friends. I have a warm family. There are four people in my family. My father is the tallest and the oldest in my family. My mother is beautiful. She is a teacher. She is thinner than my father. I am a student. I am three years older than my sister. My sister is the youngest in my family. I love my family. What about you?

Bye bye,

May

嗨，傑伊，

我很高興成為你的筆友。我有一個溫暖的家庭。我家有四個人。我父親是家裡最高、年齡最大的人。我媽媽很漂亮。她是一名教師。她比我父親瘦。我是個學生。我比我姐姐大三歲。我妹妹是我家裡最小的。我愛我的家人。那你呢？

再見，

五月

85. 描寫你的週末生活，注意用一般現在時。

範文：

My Weekend

I have happy weekend.

On Saturday morning I always have English CLASses at school. I study hard in the CLASsroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.

So I love weekends.

我的週末

我週末快樂。

星期六早上我總是在學校上英語課。我在教室裡努力學習。下午我經常玩電腦遊戲。星期天早上我經常畫畫。有時我去看望我的祖母和祖父。有時我聽音樂。星期天下午我經常做家務或去購物。

所以我喜歡週末。

如果你的孩子真能背誦默寫這些小作文，小升初入學考試妥妥地英語作文幾乎就是滿分了。成為英語學霸一點問題都沒有！最後，祝大家學習進步，假期愉快！

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65. Holiday Life

Hi! My English name is Tom. I had a very good time in this winter vacation.

First, I went to Hong Kong. I played in Disneyland and Ocean Park. I enjoyed a fantastic voyage on the Ocean Express. I enjoyed the Mine Train and the Flying Swing, too.

Second, I went to China Science and Technology museum.

Last, I went to grandpa's house and played with my friends.

I am so happy.

假日生活

你好！我的英文名是湯姆。這個寒假我玩得很開心。

首先，我去了香港。我在迪斯尼樂園和海洋公園玩過。我在海上快車上度過了一段美妙的旅程。我也很喜歡礦產火車和鞦韆兩個遊玩項目。

第二，我去了中國科技館。

最後，我去了爺爺家，和朋友們一起玩。

我是如此的幸福。

66.It is my living day.

I get up at six in the morning. I have milk and eggs for breakfast. Then I go to school by bus. I have four lessons in the morning. I have lunch at home. I have two lessons in the afternoon. After school I do my homework. I go to bed at nine in the evening.

我一天的生活

我早上六點起床。 我早餐吃牛奶和雞蛋。 然後我坐公共汽車去學校。 我上午有四節課。 我在家吃午飯。 我下午有兩節課。 放學後我做家庭作業。 我晚上九點上床睡覺。

67. My school

Welcome to my school. Look! The teachers' offices are on your right, And the library is on your left. There are many books in the library. Go straight, and you can see the classrooms on your left. There are many classrooms in our school. In front of the classrooms, there is a little park, It is very beautiful. The playground is next to the park and the classrooms, It's so big. Students often play on the playground. My school is very nice, Do you like it？

歡迎來到我的學校。看！教師辦公室在右邊，圖書館在左邊，圖書館裡有很多書。直走，你能看到教室在左邊。我們學校有很多教室，教室前面有一個小公園，它很漂亮。操場在公園和教室附近，它很大，學生經常在操場上玩。我的學校很好，你喜歡它嗎？

重點短語：welcome to…；on your right，go straight；on your left； in front of； next to；on the playground．

68. My last weekend

Last Saturday，my parents and I went to the park．First，we watched the flowers．Then，we climbed the mountains．Finally，we flew the kite．In the afternoon，we visited my grandparents．Except me，other family members talked a lot．I played outside．In the evening，we had supper together．

Last Sunday，I cleaned my room．After that，my friends and I went to the zoo to took some pictures．We played happily．And at five o'clock，we went home．I felt happy and tired．

What do you think of my last weekend？

我的上週末

上週六，我和我的父母去了公園。首先，我們看了鮮花；然後，我們爬了山；最後，我們放了風箏。當天下午，我們看望了我的爺爺奶奶。除了我，其他的家人在聊天，而我在外面玩。晚上，我們一起吃了晚飯。

上週日，我打掃了我的房間。之後，我和我的朋友去動物園拍了一些照片。我們玩得很開心。五點鐘，我們回家了，我既感到高興又感覺疲憊。

你覺得我上個週末怎麼樣？

重點詞彙：weekend週末，mountains山，pictures照片。

重點句型：

1．we climbed the mountains我們爬了山。

2．常用句型：①I felt…我感到… ②What do you think of…你覺得…怎麼樣？

69. My Nature Park

There is a nature park in front of my village．It's not big．There is a lake in the park．There are many fish in it．There are many trees beside the lake．There are many flowers under the trees． The air is nice and clean．I like my nature park．

我的自然公園

在我村的前面有一個自然公園，它不大。公園裡有一個湖，裡面有很多魚。湖的一邊有很多樹，樹底下開了很多花。那裡的空氣很清新，我喜歡我的自然公園。

重點詞彙：

in front of，above，behind，under，beside，flowers，trees，lake等

重要句型：There is …，There are…

70.

My weekend

I have a good weekend．On the weekend I often wash my clothes．Sometimes I play football．And I usually read books and do my homework．I like my weekend．And what about you？

我的週末

我過了一個很棒的週末。週末我經常洗衣服，有時候也踢足球。我也經常讀書和做作業。我喜歡我的週末，你的呢？

重點詞彙：often，wash clothes，play football，read books．

重點句型：I often…，Sometimes I…In the morning I usually…

71. My friend

I have a friend．Her name is Amy．She is 13 years old．She is from American．She is thin and short．She has long hairs and big eyes．She has a small nose．She likes math very much and she is good at it．And I like her very much．We are good friends.

我的朋友

我有一個朋友。她的名字叫艾米。她13歲。她來自美國。她又瘦又矮。她有長頭髮和大眼睛。她有一個小鼻子。她非常喜歡數學，而且擅長數學。我非常喜歡她。我們是好朋友。

重點詞彙：America，thin and short，long hair，big eyes，

Small nose，like，math，like，her，very much

72. This is my day

Today is Sunday．First，I get up early at 6：30．I brush my teeth and wash my face．Next，I have my breakfast at 7：00．Then，I clean my room．After that，I play with my best friend．We go to the zoo together．This's my day．What about you？

我的一天

今天是星期天。首先，我六點半起床，刷牙和洗臉。接下來，七點鐘吃早餐，然後，我打掃了我的房間。在那之後，我和我最好的朋友一起出去玩。我們一起去動物園。這是我的一天，你的呢？

重點詞彙：have breakfast吃早餐，clean room打掃房間，play with sb和某人一起玩耍

73. My Habits

I have many habits．For example，I always read books everyday．I often go to the park and fly a kite．I sometimes do my homework at home．But I never swim in the winter．These are my habits．What about you？

我的習慣

我有很多習慣：例如我每天都會讀書，我經常去公園放風箏，我有時在家做作業，但是我從來不在冬天游泳。這些是我的習慣，你的呢？

重點詞彙：always，often，sometimes，never，read books，go to the park，watch TV，fly a kite，swim in the winter，do my homework

重點句型：

I always read books everyday我總是每天讀書；I sometimes do my homework at home我有時在家做作業。

74. My Holiday Plan

The summer holiday is coming．I am very excited．Now let me tell you my plan．

I will travel to Sanya with my mother and father during this summer holiday．We will go there by plane．I will go shopping with my mother in the evening．During the day，we will go swimming．We will take many photos and buy many special gifts．

I believe we will have a good time there．

我的假期計劃

暑假快到了，我很興奮，現在讓我告訴你我的計劃：

我會在這個暑假期間跟著我的父母去三亞。我們將坐飛機到達那裡，晚上我和媽媽準備一起去購物。白天，我們計劃去游泳，我們會拍很多照片，買很多特別的禮物。

我相信我們會在那裡度過美好的時光。

重點詞彙：want to，travel，go shopping，swim，like，by plane，mother，father．

My Holiday Plan

重點句型：The summer holiday is coming．暑假快到了；We will go there by plane我們將乘飛機去那。

75. My Favourite Holiday

My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival．It's the Chinese New Year．For the Spring Festival，we buy new clothes，clean the doors，windows and sweep the floors．And we make dumplings．Kids get lucky money．That's interesting．I love the Spring Festival．

我最喜歡的節日

我最喜歡的節日是春節，它是中國的新年。因為春節我們可以買新衣服、擦門、擦窗戶和打掃地板，而且我們可以包餃子。孩子們可以得到壓歲錢，非常有趣。我愛春節！

重點詞彙：the Spring Festival（春節）， buy new clothes（新衣服） ，clean the doors（擦門） ，clean the windows （擦窗戶）， sweep the floors（打掃地板），make dumplings（包餃子）， lucky money（壓歲錢）．

For the Spring Festival，we buy new clothes，clean the doors， windows and sweep the floors．And we make dumplings． 因為春節我們可以買新衣服、擦門、擦窗戶和打掃地板．而且我們可以包餃子．（並列句）

76. 請你用4-6句話介紹你熟悉的城市，比較這座城市的過去和現在。

提示：famous， old， small， big， new， now， then

【分析】本文介紹熟悉的城市，介紹過去的情況時時態用一般過去時，介紹現在的情況時時態用一般現在時，人稱用第三人稱。

重點詞彙、短語：an old city一座古老的城市

重點句型： It is very famous．它很有名。

【解答】

Guangzhou is an old city， It is very famous. The park was small then. It is big now. The street was old then， But it is new now.

廣州是一個古老的城市，它很有名。那時公園很小，現在它很大。街道是舊的，但是它現在是新的。

77. 請給你的好朋友寫一封信，在信中你可以介紹一下你的家庭。要求：語法正確，語句通順，不少於40個單詞。

【分析】這裡介紹自己的一些基本信息，時態用一般現在時，人稱用第一人稱。

重點詞彙：a photo of…的照片；How about 怎麼樣。

重點句型：Do you want to know my family．你想了解我的家人嗎？

【解答】

Dear Amy，

Do you want to know my family？Look，this is a photo of my family．The tallest man is my father．And I'm the shortest．My mother is thinner than my father．How about your family？

Yours，

Mary

親愛的艾米，

你想認識我的家人嗎？看，這是我家人的照片．最高的男人是我爸爸．我是最矮的．我的媽媽比我爸爸瘦．你的家人呢？

你的，

瑪麗

【點評】寫作時，注意多用簡單句子，注意時態，平時注意一下語法，多背單詞和短語，積累詞彙量．多讀課文，增強語感．

78. 假如你是老師，請你設計學校開放日的計劃，至少寫5句話。

The parents will visit our school on the Open Day．First．

【分析】

1．全文通用一般將來時（will+動詞原形）

2．重點詞組：the Open Day（開放日），visit the classroom（參觀教室），the hall（大廳），go to the playground（去操場），play games（玩遊戲）

3．關鍵句型．主要是陳述句（分三個部分）

First，the parents will visit the classroom．Ms．Zhang will tell them about the lessons．

首先，父母們會參觀教室，張老師將會跟他們說明功課。

Next，they'll go to the hall．The children will sing for their parents．

其次，他們將會去大廳，孩子們會唱歌給他們的父母聽。

Finally，they'll go to the playground．

最後，他們將去操場。

【解答】

The parents will visit our school on the Open Day．First，the parents will visit the classroom．Ms．Zhang will tell them about the lessons．Next，they'll go to the hall．The children will sing for their parents．Finally，they'll go to the playground．The children will play games with their parents．

孩子們的父母親將會在開放日來學校參觀。首先，父母們會參觀教室，張老師將會跟他們說明功課；其次，他們將會去大廳，孩子們會唱歌給他們的父母聽；最後，他們將去操場，孩子們將會和他們的父母一起做遊戲。

【點評】英語作文，是指用英語針對某一幅圖畫寫出一篇文章，是英語考試最常見的一種題目類型，英語作文要求閱讀、寫作比較高，英文書寫應符合書寫規範，英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀，字母的大小和字母之間的距離要勻稱．書寫應做到字形秀麗漂亮，通篇勻稱和諧．掌握寫作中句子的人稱時態，在細節描寫方面還要多反思，有時是轉折關係，同時要掌握一些語法知識和基本句型．

79. 快畢業了，你有什麼話想對你的同學說嗎？把它寫在下面。

【分析】本文是一篇應用文，主要可以寫明信片的形式寫出畢業時對同學的感謝和祝福．時態可用一般現在時。

重點單詞/短語：thank you， appreciate， wish， hope

【解答】

Dear Xiao Wang，

Thank you for your help with my study and life in this 6 years in school．I appreciate the time that spent together with you．I hope that you will have a fresh new start in middle school．Wish you a good luck and happy life．Don't forget to connect with me often．

Yours，

Xiao Ke

親愛的小王：

感謝你這6年來在學校的學習和生活中給我的幫助．我非常珍惜曾和你在一起的時光．我希望你升入中學有一個全新的開始．祝願你擁有好運和快樂的生活！不要忘了常聯繫！

你的好友：

小柯

【點評】作文題首先要審好題，儘量用簡語法單句去寫．注意用熟悉的單詞，語法正確、書寫規範．

80．以"My hobbies"為題，寫一篇小作文，要求不少於30個單詞．

提示：I have some hobbies．I like…Hobbies can make me happy．

My hobbies

I have some hobbies．I like playing football，listening to music and drawing pictures．【說明自己愛好廣泛】When I am at school，I often play football with my friends．I think playing football is very interesting and exciting．When I am at home．I like listening to music．Sometimes I like drawing pictures．At weekends，I like going shopping with my parents．【逐一說明自己的愛好】

Hobbies can make me happy．【愛好的作用】Do you have any hobbies？【引發話題】

【分析】

根據開頭句子I have some hobbies．"我有多種愛好"可知，要使用第一人稱來寫這篇作文．hobbies是複數，所以就要寫出自己的多個愛好；結尾句子Hobbies can make me happy．含義是"愛好讓我高興．"所以要寫的愛好必須是健康的、積極向上的！表達愛好時通常運用的動詞形式是like doing something（表示愛好時like 後面要用動詞的﹣ing 形式）。

【解答】

My hobbies

I have some hobbies．I like playing football，listening to music and drawing pictures．When I am at school，I often play football with my friends．I think playing football is very interesting and exciting．When I am at home．I like listening to music．Sometimes I like drawing pictures．At weekends，I like going shopping with my parents．

Hobbies can make me happy．Do you have any hobbies?

【點評】本題考查學生的寫作能力。靈活運用動詞的﹣ing 形式來表示愛好：寫作時必須緊扣題目要求和已給出的句型提示，並靈活使用一些連詞和表示頻度的副詞；書寫時儘量書寫自己會寫的短語以便容易得分；還要注意居首字母的大寫、句末合適的標點符號！

81.

My family

My name is Mary. I come from China. I am a Chinese girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.

我叫瑪麗。我來自中國。我是一箇中國女孩。我是個學生。我在五年級。我喜歡我的老師。她的英語很好。我家有四個人。我有一個雙胞胎妹妹。我父親是個醫生。我媽媽是個老師。我非常愛他們。他們也愛我。

82. My net friend

I am Tony. I a have a computer. I have a net friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend?

我的網友

我是託尼。我有一臺電腦。我有個網友。他叫傑克。他12歲。他是個學生。他喜歡上網。我們經常在聊天室裡交談。我們用英語交談。我的英語現在很好。他是個好孩子。我非常喜歡他。你想有網友嗎？

重點詞彙：computer

net friend 網友

talk with each other(互相交談)

in the chat room (在聊天室)

talk in English (用英語交談)

83. A shopping day

Yesterday was Jack’s shopping day. He went shopping with his mother.

They went to the Happy Shop . They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4 yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at Mr. Chen’s Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle Eddy’s Store . They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy car. It’s 105 yuan. They were very happy.

購物日

昨天是傑克的購物日。他和母親一起去購物。

他們去了快樂商店。他們買了一些糖果。他們是4元。他們買了一卷衛生紙。他們在陳先生的店裡買了一盒冰淇淋，在艾迪叔叔的店裡買了一瓶洗髮水和一雙襪子。他們去了藍色的大百貨公司。他們買了一輛玩具車。105元。他們很高興。

84. 假設你是May, 請用不少於60個單詞來向你的筆友Jay介紹你的家庭情況，請在文中使用3個最高級和2個比較級。

範文：

Hi, Jay,

I’m very happy to be your pen-friends. I have a warm family. There are four people in my family. My father is the tallest and the oldest in my family. My mother is beautiful. She is a teacher. She is thinner than my father. I am a student. I am three years older than my sister. My sister is the youngest in my family. I love my family. What about you?

Bye bye,

May

嗨，傑伊，

我很高興成為你的筆友。我有一個溫暖的家庭。我家有四個人。我父親是家裡最高、年齡最大的人。我媽媽很漂亮。她是一名教師。她比我父親瘦。我是個學生。我比我姐姐大三歲。我妹妹是我家裡最小的。我愛我的家人。那你呢？

再見，

五月

85. 描寫你的週末生活，注意用一般現在時。

範文：

My Weekend

I have happy weekend.

On Saturday morning I always have English CLASses at school. I study hard in the CLASsroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.

So I love weekends.

我的週末

我週末快樂。

星期六早上我總是在學校上英語課。我在教室裡努力學習。下午我經常玩電腦遊戲。星期天早上我經常畫畫。有時我去看望我的祖母和祖父。有時我聽音樂。星期天下午我經常做家務或去購物。

所以我喜歡週末。

如果你的孩子真能背誦默寫這些小作文，小升初入學考試妥妥地英語作文幾乎就是滿分了。成為英語學霸一點問題都沒有！最後，祝大家學習進步，假期愉快！

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