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第一部分：12個句型

第二部分：100個好句子

1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.

在這個迅速發展的世界裡，對每個人來說，學好英語是非常重要的。

同樣句型包括：It is important/（necessary, difficult, convenient, possible）for sb. to do sth.

2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.

你工作越努力，你取得的進步就越大。

(1)The+比較級..., the+比較級...

(2)比較級+and+比較級（The world is getting smaller and smaller.）

3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

如果每個人都為保護環境做出貢獻，世界會變得更加美好。

類似的句型還有：If necessary…, they can…

4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday.

記憶新單詞最好的方法是每天操練這些單詞。

5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic

我的家庭氣氛溫馨和睦。

6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.

人們為什麼選擇生活在城市的原因是因為城市的生活更方便、更多彩。

7. I had a great first impression of American people.

我對美國人民有了很好的第一印象。

8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.

我們對自己解決問題的能力有足夠的信心。

9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.

隨著現代科技的迅速發展，互聯網已經成為生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。

10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.

大家應該儘可能的多讀書。

11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.

由於實施了改革開放政策，中國變得更加繁榮了。

12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.

我們都需要呼吸清新的空氣，我們都需要飲用潔淨的水，我們都需要綠地來享受。

13. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.

讓我們一起努力把世界變得更加美好。

14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and productive things.

我們應該充分利用好時間去做有用的、富有成效的事。

15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.

我們應該養成一個好習慣，明智地利用時間。

16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?

我的確想知道的是，他是否會在下個月出國。

17. Television is harmful to developing minds.

電視不利於開發心智。

18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized

孩子們都有很大的潛能，而父母卻沒有意識到這一點。

19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.

在過去的10年裡，我們學校發生了巨大的變化。

20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.

那些花更多時間和家人在一起的人通常會更健康更幸福。

21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.

這份工作太辛苦，差點使我半途而廢。

(1)直接使用：so… that…

The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.

這份工作太辛苦、太無聊，而且沒完沒了，這使我非常累，差點半途而廢。

(2)能夠增加句子層次的高級連詞還有：

(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)

22. The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of quality, was set up in the 1980’s.

生產高品質電視的紅星電視機廠，始建於1980年。

23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.

我們可以向世界每個地方發電子郵件的電子閱覽室，對老師和同學都同樣開放。

24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.

我感覺我會是你們公司所需要的人。

25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高級詞彙：increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graduates.

工人和工程師的數量已超過了2000人，而且他們有80%都是大學學歷。

26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.

在校園內，學生擁有手機的趨勢在不斷增長。

27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.

現今，在農村地區還有很多孩子失學。我認為原因之一就是他們的家庭太貧困，而無法供應他們上學。

28. People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.

人們應該增加對兒童教育的重視，因為他們會在祖國的未來扮演重要的角色。

29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.

到2008年，我們會看到北京像花園一樣，有著更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。

30. How nice to hear from you again.

能再次收到你的來信真是太好了。

31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

敬盼早日回覆。

I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.

我期待與你早日相見。

32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

如果你有什麼問題和請求只管跟我說。

33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.

不管你將來做什麼，英語都是最重要的。

34. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

沒有什麼比接受教育更重要的事了。

35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.

毫無疑問，玩電子遊戲正在成為影響學生學習的最大問題。

36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.

顯然，早該採取一些積極的措施來解決問題。

寫作高手使用的高難度表達：

I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.

我建議有關部門採取一些有效措施改善現狀。

37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自從他上高中，他一直很用功。

38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我們應該不遺餘力的美化我們的環境。

39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.

吸菸對我們的健康有很大的影響。

40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.

有句名言說道：風暴使樹木深深紮根。

41. It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.

很榮幸給你介紹我的一位好朋友，劉翔。

42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.

出於英語教師世家的她，對英語有著特別的興趣。

描寫人物性格的高級得分詞彙如下：

diligent 勤奮的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的

modest謙虛的 optimistic樂觀的 talkative健談的 enthusiastic熱情的

43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.

我充分認識到英語對我的未來是多麼的重要。

44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!

我覺得電子字典很方便，但會使人們變懶。

45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.

總之，出國留學的優點要大於它的缺點。

46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.

現在，我想這真是一次成功的經歷，並且我完全理解了勞動的意義。

47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.

通過這次的地震，我認識到了群眾的力量是無窮的。

高級名言諺語活學活用。

解釋：“群眾的力量是無窮的”這句名言是我們自己造的，極具威力，然後再安在毛主席的頭上，更顯力量。最後為了增加真實性加上時間和地點，使判卷老師誤以為真，根本不敢懷疑。於是，心想：“這個句子太棒了，我都沒聽說過！”

造句：In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.

48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide.

如果你有空閒時間我的家鄉做客，我會非常樂意做你的導遊。

49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about the student’s using the Internet.

如今，老師和家長都對學生上網現象極為擔心。

50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.

對於該問題的看法因人而異。

51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.

我們被賦予新的機會和麵臨著新的挑戰。

52. Thank you for your consideration.

感謝你的體諒。

53. I really appreciate what you’ve done for my family and me.

我衷心感謝你為我和我家人所做的一切。

We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.

如果你幫助我們小孩學英語，我們將感激不盡。

54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.

我們永遠都不會忘記在一起度過的日子。

55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.

很多人開始意識到鍛鍊的重要性了。

56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.

報告將在10月12日3：30在報告廳舉行。

57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.

學生應該知道如何利用他們的時間。

58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.

我厭倦了日復一日地做一些例行公事。

59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.

征服英語不亞於征服一座高山，都需要決心，勇氣和毅力。

60. I’m disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.

我對我們隊在運動會上的表現感到失望。

61. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.

到目前為止，我對我們取得的成績很是滿意。

更多表示“決心”的高級句型：

I’m determined to…

I have made up my mind to complete the task.

62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.

這個城市位於長江畔。

63. I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

兩星期前收到了你的來信，我真是太高興了。

64. I’m writing to request more information about the day tour to London.

我寫信是為了瞭解更多去倫敦旅行的信息。

65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

最近，我們班展了開一場討論，是關於中學生是否有必要帶手機去上學。

66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.

我不知道你是否方便多告訴我一些有關旅行的事。

67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.

可以肯定，如果開車的人少一些，空氣汙染就一定會減少。

68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.

我個人認為教師是世界上最重要的職業。

69. We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.

我們無法想象沒有純淨的水，這個世界會變成生麼樣子。

70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

當我沿著公園路往東走的時候，有一個老人在街的另一邊從公園裡走出來。

71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.

在大城市，有更多的學校和醫院供人們使用。

72. Some people think that we should read extensively.

有一些人認為，我們應該有選擇性地閱讀。

73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.

在我看來，你結束留學後應該回國。

74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.

另一個原因，我認為你回國可以更方便地照顧你日漸年邁的父母。

75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.

我們學校通常下午四點下課。

76. I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend tomorrow’s lecture on American history.

我很抱歉，明天我不能參加那場關於美國曆史的演講。

77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.

花在教育鍛鍊上的時間是25分鐘，只有12分鐘的時間用來做家務。

78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.

你可能忘了昨天下午你花錢買了其他東西。

79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.

好習慣是成功的捷徑。

80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.

那個年輕的小男孩深深地感動著我，因為我相信雷鋒一直活在我們的心中。

81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.

很多新的樓房建了起來，路也都拓寬了。

82. It is more than ten months since we last met.

從我們上次見面到現在已經有十個多月了。

83. It’s very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.

每天幫助我複習功課，你真是太好了。

84. Nothing can live without air and water.

沒有空氣和水，任何東西都不能生存。

85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.

我寧願住在農村，而不願住在城市。

86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.

應阻止人們往河裡扔髒東西。

87. Peter sets aside some money every month so that he can buy a new car.

彼得每月留出一點錢以便購買一輛新汽車。

88. Linda didn’t go to bed until midnight so that she could finish reading the book.

為了看完這本書，琳達直到午夜才睡。

89. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.

早睡早起有益於健康。

90. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules.

越來越多的人意識到遵守交通規則的重要性。

91. Mrs. Brown is an Australian woman teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of China.

布朗女士是一個澳大利亞的老師，她有一頭金黃色的頭髮和一雙藍色的眼睛，她去過中國的各個地方。

92. On Sunday, May 18, we will visit Beijing, which has a history of 400 years.

5月8日，星期天，我們將會參觀擁有400多年悠長曆史的北京。

93. I think students should balance well between work and study.

我認為學生應該平衡好工作和學習兩方面。

94. Friendship is one of the most precious emotions in our life.

在我們的生命中，友誼其中的一種非常珍貴的感情。

95. It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （適用於自編名言）

不言而喻，青春一去不復返。

96. Last but not least, it will definitely benefit the citizens.

最後而又很重要的一點，它必定給市民帶來福利。

97. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.

隨著日益迅速的經濟發展，更多的問題受到我們的關注。

98. The preservation of forests has aroused people’s wide concern

保護森林引發人們的廣泛關注.

99. As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of the opinion that…

就我而言,我贊同…的觀點

100. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.

不僅僅是為了我們，更是為了我們的後代，政府和普通市民應該聯合起來，使這個世界變成更美好的家園。

第三部分：作文技法

很多同學留言說，英語作文總是得分不高，有時候寫到一半就無話可說了，別說寫幾句漂亮的長句了，寫夠“字數”都覺得很痛苦。同學們莫著急，小百今天來幫你解除痛苦，只要用到這些祕訣，讓你英語作文輕輕鬆鬆拿高分。

分享以下四種辦法，可以幫助同學們有效展開文章，完成寫作任務。

追加成分，擴展句子

在閱讀理解中遇到長句子時，我們要學會通過找句子主幹，把長句子縮短；而在寫作文時，我們則要反其道而行，針對目標句子，我們在要點基礎上適當添加合乎邏輯的附加成分，如定語（從句）、狀語（從句）、非謂語結構、獨立主格等成分，使表達更清晰，主題更突出。

例1 高考臨近，學習時間變緊，任務加重，很多同學內心壓力大，學習效率低下。請為即將舉行的班會寫一篇英語演講稿，談談你對保持良好的精神狀態，高效而健康地進行復習備考的建議。要點如下：堅持鍛鍊；合理計劃；注重飲食。

要點拓展如下：

1. 堅持鍛鍊

普通表達：We should keep on doing exercise.

高級表達：To keep up good spirits and prepare for the big day efficiently and healthily， we are advised to do regular workout， building up our bodies.

2. 合理計劃

普通表達：We should have proper study plan.

高級表達：Never hesitate to make an organized and proper schedule， which contributes much to the accomplishment of our academic assignments.

3. 注重飲食

普通表達：we should pay special attention to our diet as well.

高級表達：Certainly， keeping a balanced diet， we are bound to feel energetic and dynamic， which serves the most essential functions.

點評：在對所給要點進行簡要分析之後，就應考慮使用哪些詞語和句式，從而符合五檔作文所要求的“有高級詞彙和高級句式”的標準。在以上三個要點的處理上，通過添加高級詞彙如efficiently and healthily， regular workout， organized and proper schedule， academic assignments， feel energetic and dynamic， essential以及分詞結構、定語從句等成分，充分擴充了句子，不僅篇幅更長，亮點也更多了。

補加語句，充實文章

根據作文的行文走向，適當增加一些與主題相關的語句，或根據作文題目中提示的要點，恰如其分地衍生出一些句子，即能夠起到“前引後聯”的作用，又可以補充一些相關信息，幫助讀者理解所寫內容。此外，還可以起到協調句式，避免單調的作用。

例2 假定你是李華，你的朋友湯姆得知中國學生數學成績總體優於英國學生，所以他想知道中國數學教與學的情況，請你寫一封郵件回覆他。要點如下：課堂學習時間；作業量；課外學習等。

要點拓展如下：

1. 課堂學習時間

A special Chinese high school student usually has seven math classes per week， and some schools even offer nine classes for math， in which teachers often address key points and most common problems they’ve found in students’ homework handed in recently.

2. 作業量

Due to teachers’ immediately feedback on their homework， the majority of the students are able to have a good command of their learning materials， even though the workload is quite huge.

3. 課外學習

Besides homework， some students also manage to spend extra time reviewing what they’ve learned in class and get their notes organized. The revision style varies， but there is a common belief among students that math is of great importance. As a result， they devote quantities of time to it.

點評：該作文題所給提示並不多。在完成該作文前，同學們要考慮以下幾個問題： 1. 課堂學習時間是多還是少？每週有多少節課？2. 作業量是大還是小？每天有多少？3. 課外學生都有哪些課外活動來學習數學？

通過有針對性地對目標進行分析，我們要為自己的作文找到拓展的方向。

此外，我們還可以根據實際情況添加一兩句名言警句來點綴文章，使評分再上一個檔次。

例3 Were I three years younger than I am now， I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes， living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives， practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.

點評：Living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. 這個句子儘管結構並不複雜，屬於“主—系—表”結構，但該句採用了類比這一修辭手法，將無目標的生活比作無指南針的航海，頓時使人生目標形象起來。

添加過渡，條理清晰

在寫作當中，恰當使用一些銜接手段，包括使用過渡詞和過渡句，可以使文章嚴謹、流暢、富有節奏。

例4 假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信，請他提供作品。信的內容包括：

1.主題：環境保護；

2.展覽時間；

3.投稿郵箱：[email protected]。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter，

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. As far as I know， the theme of the show is environmental protection. Actually， I know you are gifted in taking good pictures and have always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I clearly remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. In addition， it will start from June 15th and last three weeks and what makes us excited is that any student who is interested can participate in it. In a word， I firmly believe that this is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join， please send your photos to [email protected].

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

點評：本篇範文很好地完成了要求，要點擴充合情合理。全文句式多樣化，並沒有一直使用陳述句，而是穿插使用祈使句等多種句式，符合邀請函的特點。文章中使用了較多的複合句，如定語從句any student who is interested can participate in it，時間狀語從句... the last time you visited our school，條件狀語從句If you want to join ...等，體現出不錯的駕馭英語的能力。

此外， 本文使用了as far as I know，in addition，in a word，等過渡短語，巧妙地將三個要點“主題、展覽時間、投稿郵箱”串聯起來，使閱卷老師對作者表述的意思一目瞭然，同時也增強了文章的條理。

我們寫作當中經常會用到的過渡語有：first of all， to begin/start with， in the first place， first and foremost， second（ly）， furthermore， moreover， what’s more， in addition， besides， but， however， on the contrary， nonetheless， in contrast/comparison， nevertheless， hence， therefore， in conclusion， to conclude， in a word， last but not least等。

重點突出，詳加描述

在對文章進行展開時，除了可以採用前文提到的添加追加成分、過渡成分來拓展句子外，我們還可以根據題目提示，確定整篇文章的主要點和次要點，在主要點上著力發揮，次要點表述清楚即可，不用過多渲染。

例4 讀下面圖畫，按要求用英語寫一篇詞數為120左右的短文。

內容包括：

描述畫面；

概述其含義；

談談個人感想。

鑿壁偷光

注意：

1. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息。

In the picture， we can see a boy in worn clothes，who was reading a book with full attention. He was sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it and a weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy， being poor， couldn’t afford even a candle， so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

Of course， things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

點評：該篇習作語言豐富，表達準確，結構清晰，過渡自然，尤其在內容的安排和取捨上，處理得十分恰當。本題的三個要點中，要點3是本文的重頭戲，體現了高考作文題的“思想性”，本文對此著重“潑墨”，所佔篇幅幾乎為全文篇幅一半，要點2次之；針對要點1，本文對圖片僅需作簡要描述，一句話即可。

“不積小流，無以成江河；不積跬步，無以至千里”。要想寫出高質量的考場作文，就需要“適當添加細節”。而細節的增加需要從實際需要出發，結合作文的題材、體裁以及題中給出的要點，“畫龍點睛”式地添加，不要信口開河，更不能夠信馬由韁、亂加一氣，最終偏離主題，給閱卷老師留下“該寫的不寫，不該寫的寫得過多”的不良印象。

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